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Introduction Hook the reader in, and let them know what your writing is going to be about.

I'm going to be writing about a holiday when me and my old friends and our class  went for a fun day and went swimming and going in wakas

Paragraph 1 What is camp? Who, When, Where, Why. All the information. What activities did you do? Where do you sleep? How long is the camp etc...

The camp was at the beach and we went on wakas and had lots of fun swimming

Paragraph 2 Highlight One - What was one of your highlights? E.g. Activity, Food, Tenting, Pools, Concert

The activity i liked was when we went in wakas and had some burgers and sushi and when me and my friends did the haka and went swimming

Paragraph 3 Highlight One - What was one of your highlights? E.g. Activity, Food, Tenting, Pools, Concert

I liked the most was when me and my friends did the haka and when we had burgers for luch

Paragraph 4 Thank you’s. Who made this happen for you? I.e. Family, School, Parent Helpers, Teachers, and Leaders etc

My principal gave my whole school a fun day at pt england beach

Conclusion What did you learn about yourself on camp, why would you recommend that every student does this in future.

Well we had to say what we were going to be in future  i said i’d be a police man my friends wanted to be police to

hi my name is viliami this is a planning about my school when we had a fun going i wakas and doing the haka and having burgers